Here is our place to come together as a class to post your projects and to comment on each other's work. In addition to the project work, each week you will post a short review of the work of a graphic designer found from the list of 68 Graphic Designers posted in week 1 on the syllabus.
Two posts are expected from each student... project work and review work. Each counts as one attendance.
Saturday, December 3, 2011
CD Cover - Floetry
My favorite group is Floetry. I was very disappointed when the broke up. Therefore, I choose a few songs from all of their albums to make the Floetry Lounge. I created to images, I think I like the B&W better though.
Okay this is a good start on part one....the bottom one is stronger in grayscale as it's a bit more legible. I like how you reversed the image on the inside cover and lightened it up by reducing the opacity. One small comment is be careful about your margins do you see how the type goes right to the bottom edge of the image? It would be stronger if you could leave a margin down there.
I find all the typography in the color version on top to be far more illegible... also the image used on the left side has been squashed in... a major no-no.
Wow, toya we share the same pain. I really liked Floery.
ReplyDeletei
Okay this is a good start on part one....the bottom one is stronger in grayscale as it's a bit more legible. I like how you reversed the image on the inside cover and lightened it up by reducing the opacity. One small comment is be careful about your margins do you see how the type goes right to the bottom edge of the image? It would be stronger if you could leave a margin down there.
ReplyDeleteI find all the typography in the color version on top to be far more illegible... also the image used on the left side has been squashed in... a major no-no.
Gary
ReplyDeleteI will fix and I will use the B&W, thank you